Saturday, June 20, 2009

Of me...and you

of constant struggles...and the undying spirit,
of prevailing hope...and the failed expectations,
of inviting unrealities...and the bare truths,
of weakening will...and the promises kept,

of biting sarcasms...and the jovial talks,
of desperate wants...and the killed desires,
of selfish sharing...and the unwanted outcomes,
of strong memories...and the fading words,

of dull numbness...and the unspoken feelings,
of momentary chatters...and the long silences,
of forced seclusion...and the closeness felt,
of piercing quietness...and the inaudible shouts,

of concerned eyes...and those little smiles,
of habitual dormancy...and the long walks,
of innocent warmth...and the apparent coldness,
of inner knowing...and the uncertainties therein,

of bright opportunities...and the wrong choices,
of changing me...and you, O indifferent life,
this is the story.........

6 comments:

  1. nice composition.
    : A phase never spoken of, a phase no-one want's to be true. A phase everyone goes through and blogs into their subconscious for the fears unknown.


    on a funny note, i couldn't decide between "like it!" and "Are you mad!". If I vote A, am i mad? or If i vote C, am i dead?

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  2. hmm...nicely put !! for too long it was there...and the burden was getting too big to handle.

    And as far as those choices 'A' and 'C' goes...

    like it -> for people like you -> if they get it and like it

    can be better -> for people like you -> if they get it and want to comment miserably

    Are you mad -> for everyone -> if they don't get it(and most of the times that will be the case :P)

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  3. I abandoned a house long ago, a year back, for I thought I have changed.
    Now as time passes by it reminds me of the fun I had back there.

    Time to revive what i left. will not get to my blog i guess coz thats sacred and reserved.

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  4. what do you mean by "time to revive what i left"? coz on the other hand you say "will not get to my blog i guess coz thats sacred and reserved"....so revive as in what?

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  5. blog is reserved for my state of trance . and i have few more.

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  6. so there is a part which you are not ready to share yet...but someday you may, if the boundaries are dynamic and, with someone who is worthy enough for that sacredness...:)

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If not here then where...? If not now then when...?