of constant struggles...and the undying spirit,
of prevailing hope...and the failed expectations,
of inviting unrealities...and the bare truths,
of weakening will...and the promises kept,
of biting sarcasms...and the jovial talks,
of desperate wants...and the killed desires,
of selfish sharing...and the unwanted outcomes,
of strong memories...and the fading words,
of dull numbness...and the unspoken feelings,
of momentary chatters...and the long silences,
of forced seclusion...and the closeness felt,
of piercing quietness...and the inaudible shouts,
of concerned eyes...and those little smiles,
of habitual dormancy...and the long walks,
of innocent warmth...and the apparent coldness,
of inner knowing...and the uncertainties therein,
of bright opportunities...and the wrong choices,
of changing me...and you, O indifferent life,
this is the story.........
some of my thoughts, and experiences, and whatever...
Disclaimer and Further Insights:
All the things which get posted here, come from my day to day experiences. Its resemblance to any person living (or dead...mostly dead! Anyway very few really live...) is mostly intentional (If only you can find out that it was meant for you :P).
This blog started out with my ramblings, but somewhere along the way things changed and now I use it only for posting my finished poems (I would like to regard them as poems...even if they're not :P). Someone once told me, "you are in the wrong place, you should be taking photos, and writing poems whom only the retarded can understand". Well, all that just depends on your perspective, isn't it so? Maybe I'm in the wrong place, or maybe this is where I wanted to be ;-).
nice composition.
ReplyDelete: A phase never spoken of, a phase no-one want's to be true. A phase everyone goes through and blogs into their subconscious for the fears unknown.
on a funny note, i couldn't decide between "like it!" and "Are you mad!". If I vote A, am i mad? or If i vote C, am i dead?
hmm...nicely put !! for too long it was there...and the burden was getting too big to handle.
ReplyDeleteAnd as far as those choices 'A' and 'C' goes...
like it -> for people like you -> if they get it and like it
can be better -> for people like you -> if they get it and want to comment miserably
Are you mad -> for everyone -> if they don't get it(and most of the times that will be the case :P)
I abandoned a house long ago, a year back, for I thought I have changed.
ReplyDeleteNow as time passes by it reminds me of the fun I had back there.
Time to revive what i left. will not get to my blog i guess coz thats sacred and reserved.
what do you mean by "time to revive what i left"? coz on the other hand you say "will not get to my blog i guess coz thats sacred and reserved"....so revive as in what?
ReplyDeleteblog is reserved for my state of trance . and i have few more.
ReplyDeleteso there is a part which you are not ready to share yet...but someday you may, if the boundaries are dynamic and, with someone who is worthy enough for that sacredness...:)
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