That elusive, eternal sleep,
Refreshing the mind
And comforting as if,
One has reached atop
A mountain, high and steep.
Or, has
Touched the floor
Of an ocean, blue and deep.
These highs and lows
So unlike, the ones
You'll get with a wine cheap.
Ah! If only I could get,
That eternally elusive sleep.
Oh! that profound, ultimate sleep,
Flanked by the cohorts
Of those vivid,
Yet vague, dreams.
And the secrets they must keep
Inside their formless lucid molds;
Not unlike the reasons,
Provoking a long heartful weep.
Or the more subtle ones
That lurk behind, when a child
Decides to give up on his creep.
Ah! If only I could get,
That ultimately profound sleep.
What I get is an unyielding, tiring sleep,
As if, I've been running
Along with time, looking
for some gains, to harvest,
And maybe some favors to reap.
Or, maybe by chance
To stumble upon,
A long forgotten treasure heap.
But always this ends
With me losing my wool,
To be in winter, just a bare naked sheep.
Ah! If only I could get,
A relaxing and yielding sleep.
And I've heard of one, beyond these sleeps,
One that everyone ultimately gets,
But no one really wants to.
One, whose time is unfixed;
Slowly, like water, in your room which seeps,
But sometimes which is swift enough
Like a broom, your ties and life
In just one stroke which sweeps.
Not to lose heart, the wise men say,
For its but another beginning,
And to some onward journey your soul leaps.
So expect it or not, but one day,
Everyone shall have, this secretive greater sleep.
some of my thoughts, and experiences, and whatever...
Disclaimer and Further Insights:
All the things which get posted here, come from my day to day experiences. Its resemblance to any person living (or dead...mostly dead! Anyway very few really live...) is mostly intentional (If only you can find out that it was meant for you :P).
This blog started out with my ramblings, but somewhere along the way things changed and now I use it only for posting my finished poems (I would like to regard them as poems...even if they're not :P). Someone once told me, "you are in the wrong place, you should be taking photos, and writing poems whom only the retarded can understand". Well, all that just depends on your perspective, isn't it so? Maybe I'm in the wrong place, or maybe this is where I wanted to be ;-).
To stumble upon,
ReplyDeleteA long forgotten treasure heap.
But always this ends
With me losing my wool,
To be in winter, just a bare naked sheep.
Ah! If only I could get,
A relaxing and yielding sleep.
Great one! this is awesome.
Thanks Amit...your comments give me enough dough to go forward, and keep writing :-)
ReplyDeleteMaybe, to some my poems seem dark...but this is the way I want to, or I can, write :)
It is not always about thought process and phases your mind go through. At times its all creative and has nothing to do with your environment. The best part is its poetic!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sir! That means a lot :-)
ReplyDeleteNice poem, beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Short Poems... :)
ReplyDeleteWhat difference, O man,
ReplyDeleteBetween tonight's slumber,
And that Great Sleep,
From which we may not arise.
We are but the frames of,
A movie of dreams awake,
Rest awaits.
Forgive my vain attempt at trying to say something. You have done it far, far better. My best.
That is great, Count Sneaky...thanks a lot for giving my blabbering a thought :)
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